Voki Miles G

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This entry was written by Señor Picardo and posted on June 3, 2008 at 5:41 am and filed under Año 9. Bookmark the permalink. Follow any comments here with the RSS feed for this post. Post a comment(Latest is displayed first) or leave a trackback: Trackback URL.

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Very well structered with varied vocabulary. Very enjoyable. Maybe put more conjunctions in.

1. joe p on June 23rd, 2008 at 1:02 pm
Good use of conjunctions Mr G, a nice variety of words and descriptions. But your pronunciation could be a bit better. [=

2. Pelle The Conqueror on June 23rd, 2008 at 12:56 pm
i thought it was very clear. a good descriptive piece. there were lots of different places you mentioned, and your voice was very clear. i thought that you could have put in more conjunctions in your piece.

3. haggis on June 20th, 2008 at 6:15 pm
well done i liked it a lot.easy to understand and with good use of words like pero and porque double smiley :) i wish the picture wasnt so creepy.

4. josh w on June 17th, 2008 at 7:42 am
Well set out structure, varied vocabulary and interesting additions. pronunciation could be improved slightly.

5. CFTizzle on June 16th, 2008 at 1:00 pm